The book group I belong to read it and this is their review on it:
With high expectations
from the blurb, reviews on Amazon and the author recommendations, the group felt badly let down!
The group liked the
alternating chapters of past and present but that was felt to be the only
positive.
The book was poorly
written and the language overly flowery, the school setting was unrealistic
(all the book group members work in schools). The creation of the ‘secret
place’ in a school to post concerns and worries was a scenario ripe for
bullying and was felt to be unbelievable to them and merely a device to kick
start the plot.
There was a complete lack of suspense and the group did no not
care ‘whodunnit’ – the majority had already identified the perpetrators of both
the crime and the card early in the book! The depiction of both the police and
the teenage girls was felt to be stereotypical and one dimensional and the two
groups of girls were felt to be indistinguishable from one another. This lack
of characterisation made feeling empathy for any of the characters difficult.
The supernatural
element was ridiculous and pointless.
There was some poor
editing – if the history of Holly’s mum’s relationship with the school and her
friends, had been introduced earlier it would have made more sense about the
theme of friendship which the author was trying to explore and to use to as a
plot device.
Very disappointed!
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